Ariana - 4.- A valuable discipline or practice (lifting weights, rock climbing, karate, meditation, etc.).
Christian - 2.- This school's worst problem (and possible solutions).
Oscar - 7.- Music videos (choose one performer or group, one type of music, or one TV show).
William - 1.- The career I want to study.
Geovanna - 3.- A special or unusual person
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This school's worst problem (and possible solutions)
ResponderEliminarBrain Storming:
- Teachers
- Students
- Exams
- Study
- Work
- Grades
- Extraordinary Exams
- Failed
- Good Students
- Bad Students
- Global Exams
- Teacher who dont not know how to teach
- Bad Luck
- Study hard
Thesis Statement:
A lot of students have failed in High School, and some of them pass through a difficult moment and frustrate and some just dont care.
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ResponderEliminarFree writing
ResponderEliminarFirst of all i will have 2 minutes, and i star know at 3:24 PM
I think the the carrer i want to study is medicine, i don't know why ,but medicine is my favorite option to chose, because when i was a little boy i spent almost all the time in hospital, because of my adventures, or my sickness, i like to know symptoms, i like what is to know about a disease and have the ability to cure, i loved to know more about the functions of the body, i like what is our body made of, i like to know the components of our body, and alos how it works.
Thesis Satetement:
ResponderEliminarI know that medicine is one of the most difficult carrer to study, also i know that my efforts will have to be exagerated to get into medicine school, i will have to study a lot,but i like it so it doesn't matter, because i really love this carrer and to me is very important to help people whom are very sick, efforts will be needed, but there is nothing better than to feel you're helping other and that you prepared for that.
I think that the States Christian made are true, most of student can't concentrate when they are passing through hard times, also because some of them just don't care they just living life and other because they are frustrated with the teacher, i think is a very interesting theme to chose.
ResponderEliminarA special or unusual person
ResponderEliminarBrainstorming :
-A special person
-its character
-the love they give you
- what they mean to you
-wahat have they do to be special
-have fun with them
-respect
-be honest
-express yourself
-be confident
-trust each other
-be kind
-help eahc other when you have too
-give helpful advices
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thesis statement
ResponderEliminarA special person is the one who gives you happines and a lot of goog things to your life .
A valuable discipline or practice: ballet
ResponderEliminar-ballet
-flexibility
-practice
-passion
-relax
-sacrify
-talent
-happiness
-get responsability
-learn a lot
-strong body
-strong legs
-fun
-enjoyment
ariana herrera :)
thesis statement:
ResponderEliminarBallet is dance where you involve your heart and your body, is a the base dance, if you practice it you will finish loving it, is a disstressful activity and also a fun activity..
I think geovanna's prewriting ideas are good becasue from there she can take the main ones and write a great essay and also the thesis statements give the main idea of what could be the entire essay.
ResponderEliminarI think christian's prewriting is good, but from there he could take what are reral problems, becasue I don't think good students are a problem for exameple but that is just the prewriting and I think he will ake out those, and I think that in the thesis statement he did take the real worst problems , well some and I think that it could be interesting write about them.
ResponderEliminarMusic Videos: Performer, arist; Zona Ganjah (Reggae)
ResponderEliminarBrain Storming:
- Rastafari
- Reggae
- Political Themes
- Religious Themes
- Meditation
- Naturists
- Positive Vibrations
- Good Messages
- Non-Violent Messages
- Pacifist Influences
Thesis Statement:
Reggae groups are music groups with good influences, socially and politically talking.
I think geovana's ideas are good because it is a very good explanation of what a special person is and the ideas she has have good support to write about.
ResponderEliminarI think ariana's ideas are good and a good essay could come out of the ideas she has.
ResponderEliminari think ariana's essay is very good because its entertainig and she likes a lot to dance :D
ResponderEliminari think christian's ideas are good because that are the basic problems of school. And it can help other persons to think of that problems .
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