One time there was a family that lived in Paris, France. The family consist in mom , dad ,the twins Carlos and James of 18 years old and their exotics animals a tiger and a monkey. This family lived in the best area of Paris, where the rich people lived. Their house was really big,in the patio with a big garden and a pool. They were this rich because the father was an important investment and the mom have her own magazine company.
This family had the perfect life ,they lived in one of the most beautiful cities, they were rich, their parents love them,they were so united, and they have a good social position. They had everything to be happy, and they actualLY were mosT of the time. But sometimes Carlos get a little bit jealous of James. The reason was that James always stand out from Carlos, he was good at sports, academic, he played an instrument, he help people with disabilities, etc. Carlos did everything that James did but he wasnt that good as James, so they pay attention more to him than to Carlos. Carlos was tierd of being the shadow of his brother, but he love him. For the twins it was time to lived High School and graduate. Their parents want them to be in the best College of Paris, but Carlos didn't pass the entrance exam, but James did.
All the family was surprised and disappointed with Carlos, and with James they congratulate him, give him some gifts, and do a dinner on his honor. That was the limit for Carlos seeing how they celebrate his brother like always and he was like the black sheep in the family. He was so angry of so many years being the shadow of his twin, that the night of the dinner celebration, he went to James room and cut his head with a knife,he left the head on the bed, then he drag his twin body to the patio and get his body in the tiger cage. At the next morning the parents noticed the terrible dead of his best son, Carlos attimeted everything and said to the police how and why he did it, the court gave him 50 years in jail. The family reputation get down and it was a big scandal for them.
Once there was a boy, named Percy, who was diferent from the other kids that he knew. He was very lonely, he was friendless. Nobody wanted to be near him because he had very diferent thoughts than everybody else. Even grown-ups thought it was a waste of time trying to change someone who was so inmersed in his own way of thinking. With time he started to relate with people who called him friend, but he knew a friend was more beyond what people thought it meant to be.
As time passed by, this kid Percy, started to work out things in a way that the things he did became very effective and amazed everyone. The more the people started to see that Percy was worth of helping the more they tried to get near him. But it was useless, he was so used to be alone and do things by himself that he would not take people's word or help. Not because he was showing off, he did this because he rememberd how people excluded him. He had a lot of emotional conections with many people but still he felt alone inside.
One day he thought that. the only way to get away from people who just materially needed him was to lock himself up in a wooden box. That way he could get away from the people he wanted to and he would feel equally empty. One day he got a carpenter to build him one. it was about the size of his body only a little bigger. He got in the box, he asked the carpenter to put a golden lock on it and since he locked himself in no one heard of him again.
I'm going to choose the 3rd picture to create my story.
Once upon a time there was a family. This family was really particular because all of the siblings look the same except one, all have the same hair color, the same skin color, the same hobbys the same evrything except for one. The family was form by the mother, the father and 4 siblings. How i told before all in the family were very similiar except for one. even the parents were simliar between them.
They like the same things, like they loved to sing, that how they meet each other, in an audition to get into a group, non of then were admited but there they meet each other. they started going out and after 6 months of kwoing each other they necome boyfriends. they love each other so much that after 3 years of relationship he asked her to marry him and obviously she accepted. She was so happy that immediately she started to prepeareall for the wedding and after 3 months all was ready and they marry.
After they marry they went to live to a beatiful house that will be the best home ever. Then, after a year of having so much fun alone they decided to have a baby, so after a year and 9 months the first baby of that family was born, she was a pretty brunnette girl. They love the happiness that that girl brought to their house, so they decided to have another baby, and aggain it was a little petty brunnette girl. After that, the girls grow and now they were 3 and 2 years old. So in those times, the wife gave to her husband, the great new that they will have another baby, and then, after 9 months the new baby boorn. but this time she was not a little brunnette girl, she was blonde and completely different to her sisters. even though the parents never care about it. She was also different in everything, the other 2 girls like to sing and she loved to dance. Even though tthe parents never obligate her to sing they loved her just how she was.
Time pass, and they were a happy family it was normal becasue in every family there is somebody who si different but even though parents love all of their kids.
But there was an explanation of why she was so different. the day she born, another girl born at the same hour, so when they took the girls to celan them, the nurse who take care of them change the two girls for accident. Nobody never knew that and that is why that blonde girl born with that family and that is why she was so differrent.
The parents love her like if she was her girl and they never knew the truth. The 3 girls born like if they were real sister and the parents love the 3 for equal. They were a really happy family and they never have the least idea of what happend, but I'm sure that even though they knew the truth they will loved that girl like always.
I read christian's story and was really good. I think that it was a good story to make consious in parents who have favoritism. That is really bad because it make that the other child because jelous and a bad person, so parents should love all of their son's for equal.
I read oscar's story adn i think it was a good stroy, it wa sad to know that the situation he tells in the story occurs many times in real life, because that it why so many people try to suicide, beacuse they feel lonely, so that's why we should be ncie with all the people and talk to our near friends that we think they feell like that.
once upon a time a village lived in freedom, a village people lived in peace, people had dreams of making something really big, the village people were full of joy, but when war came to that kind of people, problems began to appear, and all these peacefull people become anger, madness and selfishness, they were so bad, that most of them didn't needed any lawyer, they argue alot, and almost for everything, but that's not the point of my story. 5 months later a family appear in my neighborhood, but not like any other family this family was different, they were The Robertsons better known as the joybertsons, this fanily was full of joy, they were so happy i can't explain how and is really confusing, did you ever had to deal with a neighbor that have everything, a neighbor that is the best neighbor of all, the nicest, the smartest, and also the richest, well, let me tell you they were the robertsons, this persons think that they have to live with joy everyday of their life, that no matter what happened to them they were always happy, i was confuse about them, how a family that is full of joy came to a village like this one, full of madness, angerness, selfishness,etc., is nonsense, but they weir, when they come to my neihgborhood, my first impression was "oh God, i pray to you and you give me this?, well the next time send a blonde family, cause it's almost puberty and i need a girl. they came out from their Expedition, and started to take all their possesions from the truck to the their house, i was totally knock out of conscience when i saw the 60" inch lcd 1080 resolution screen, i felt in love that day, it was amazing they seem like very rich persons, but they were very nice persons, when they they came to town i realized that mayber they were bad persons trying to be the envy, the next morning they were giving gifts and they organized a cookout at the nerghborhood, then i feel really bad i had a bad impression about them, i saw in the cookout that the robertsons were giving stuff, and then i realized that they were not moving their were just visiting they came to the village to bring back joy to us, i saw persons that didn't tlaked for years that were laughing together i saw lots and lots of joy, then i realized that joy was not gone forever, but just needed a little push to be release, the next day they were gone, there was no robertsons, people started making themselves question, but then they got the same point, joy it was they needed and no matter what situation can pass over a village, joy will always come back.
i like christian story it was nice, oscars story had a good imagination it had a unique touch of oscars style, ariana's story was a good one, but it was long but it was cool.
Ocnce upon a time there was a a very happy family that live in Mexico city . The father and the mother had two kids. One day the mother got very sick , and his husband took her to the doctorto see what she has brast cancer . his husband hug her and tell her he'll find the way but she will live .
She took all the treatments but not even that help her , after dying she ask to his husband if he can do a promise with her , she ask him that one day he got in love and be happy with the woman he choose . But nobody hear the promise she asked him . Edgar the younger one had 1 month and Juan had 5 years . Their grandmother and their dad took care of the two guys , they grow healthy and happy . One they his dad got in love with a woman of his work . And he love her very much that he ask her to marry him . So he took her to his house so his family meet her . The grandmother was very angry because she think , she will take the place of his daughter. And edgar dont like her , but Juan say that if his dad is happy with she , he will accept her .
His dad try to do whatever comes to his mind so the grandama and Edgar like her . But nothing help him . One day his father got very angry becuase they were very mean with she . So he tell to his ex-mother-in-law that he promise his ex-husband that one day he will fall in love another time . So she think and realize that he is a good man and he desrve to be happy another time , and that his new love wont take the place of his daughter . Edgar also try to love her new mom . They marry and be very happy .
the story i like the most is Oscar's because it has a lot of imagination , and i dont have ANY imagination . And i like William's story because what happen is very true .
I choose picture # 2
ResponderEliminarOne time there was a family that lived in
Paris, France. The family consist in mom , dad ,the twins Carlos and James of 18 years old and their exotics animals a tiger and a monkey. This family lived in the best area of Paris, where the rich people lived. Their house was really big,in the patio with a big garden and a pool. They were this rich because the father was an important investment and the mom have her own magazine company.
This family had the perfect life ,they lived in one of the most beautiful cities, they were rich, their parents love them,they were so united, and they have a good social position. They had everything to be happy, and they actualLY were mosT of the time. But sometimes Carlos get a little bit jealous of James. The reason was that James always stand out from Carlos, he was good at sports, academic, he played an instrument, he help people with disabilities, etc. Carlos did everything that James did but he wasnt that good as James, so they pay attention more to him than to Carlos. Carlos was tierd of being the shadow of his brother, but he love him. For the twins it was time to lived High School and graduate. Their parents want them to be in the best College of Paris, but Carlos didn't pass the entrance exam, but James did.
All the family was surprised and disappointed with Carlos, and with James they congratulate him, give him some gifts, and do a dinner on his honor. That was the limit for Carlos seeing how they celebrate his brother like always and he was like the black sheep in the family. He was so angry of so many years being the shadow of his twin, that the night of the dinner celebration, he went to James room and cut his head with a knife,he left the head on the bed, then he drag his twin body to the patio and get his body in the tiger cage. At the next morning the parents noticed the terrible dead of his best son, Carlos attimeted everything and said to the police how and why he did it, the court gave him 50 years in jail. The family reputation get down and it was a big scandal for them.
THE END
I have chosen the 4th picture to make my story.
ResponderEliminarOnce there was a boy, named Percy, who was diferent from the other kids that he knew. He was very lonely, he was friendless. Nobody wanted to be near him because he had very diferent thoughts than everybody else. Even grown-ups thought it was a waste of time trying to change someone who was so inmersed in his own way of thinking. With time he started to relate with people who called him friend, but he knew a friend was more beyond what people thought it meant to be.
As time passed by, this kid Percy, started to work out things in a way that the things he did became very effective and amazed everyone. The more the people started to see that Percy was worth of helping the more they tried to get near him. But it was useless, he was so used to be alone and do things by himself that he would not take people's word or help. Not because he was showing off, he did this because he rememberd how people excluded him. He had a lot of emotional conections with many people but still he felt alone inside.
One day he thought that. the only way to get away from people who just materially needed him was to lock himself up in a wooden box. That way he could get away from the people he wanted to and he would feel equally empty. One day he got a carpenter to build him one. it was about the size of his body only a little bigger. He got in the box, he asked the carpenter to put a golden lock on it and since he locked himself in no one heard of him again.
by oscarambrizfontes
I read christian story and it was awesome.
ResponderEliminarI'm going to choose the 3rd picture to create my story.
ResponderEliminarOnce upon a time there was a family. This family was really particular because all of the siblings look the same except one, all have the same hair color, the same skin color, the same hobbys the same evrything except for one. The family was form by the mother, the father and 4 siblings. How i told before all in the family were very similiar except for one. even the parents were simliar between them.
They like the same things, like they loved to sing, that how they meet each other, in an audition to get into a group, non of then were admited but there they meet each other. they started going out and after 6 months of kwoing each other they necome boyfriends. they love each other so much that after 3 years of relationship he asked her to marry him and obviously she accepted. She was so happy that immediately she started to prepeareall for the wedding and after 3 months all was ready and they marry.
After they marry they went to live to a beatiful house that will be the best home ever. Then, after a year of having so much fun alone they decided to have a baby, so after a year and 9 months the first baby
of that family was born, she was a pretty brunnette girl. They love the happiness that that girl brought to their house, so they decided to have another baby, and aggain it was a little petty brunnette girl. After that, the girls grow and now they were 3 and 2 years old. So in those times, the wife gave to her husband, the great new that they will have another baby, and then, after 9 months the new baby boorn. but this time she was not a little brunnette girl, she was blonde and completely different to her sisters. even though the parents never care about it. She was also different in everything, the other 2 girls like to sing and she loved to dance. Even though tthe parents never obligate her to sing they loved her just how she was.
Time pass, and they were a happy family it was normal becasue in every family there is somebody who si different but even though parents love all of their kids.
But there was an explanation of why she was so different. the day she born, another girl born at the same hour, so when they took the girls to celan them, the nurse who take care of them change the two girls for accident. Nobody never knew that and that is why that blonde girl born with that family and that is why she was so differrent.
The parents love her like if she was her girl and they never knew the truth. The 3 girls born like if they were real sister and the parents love the 3 for equal. They were a really happy family and they never have the least idea of what happend, but I'm sure that even though they knew the truth they will loved that girl like always.
I read aryana's story and it was very long but i liked it.
ResponderEliminarI read Oscar`s story and i think he did a great story by just having that drawing.
ResponderEliminarI read christian's story and was really good. I think that it was a good story to make consious in parents who have favoritism. That is really bad because it make that the other child because jelous and a bad person, so parents should love all of their son's for equal.
ResponderEliminarI think Ariana`s story was very good and with a lot of details, but i think she exaggerates by doing it too long, but i liked it dough.
ResponderEliminarI read oscar's story adn i think it was a good stroy, it wa sad to know that the situation he tells in the story occurs many times in real life, because that it why so many people try to suicide, beacuse they feel lonely, so that's why we should be ncie with all the people and talk to our near friends that we think they feell like that.
ResponderEliminaronce upon a time a village lived in freedom, a village people lived in peace, people had dreams of making something really big, the village people were full of joy, but when war came to that kind of people, problems began to appear, and all these peacefull people become anger, madness and selfishness, they were so bad, that most of them didn't needed any lawyer, they argue alot, and almost for everything, but that's not the point of my story. 5 months later a family appear in my neighborhood, but not like any other family this family was different, they were The Robertsons better known as the joybertsons, this fanily was full of joy, they were so happy i can't explain how and is really confusing, did you ever had to deal with a neighbor that have everything, a neighbor that is the best neighbor of all, the nicest, the smartest, and also the richest, well, let me tell you they were the robertsons, this persons think that they have to live with joy everyday of their life, that no matter what happened to them they were always happy, i was confuse about them, how a family that is full of joy came to a village like this one, full of madness, angerness, selfishness,etc., is nonsense, but they weir, when they come to my neihgborhood, my first impression was "oh God, i pray to you and you give me this?, well the next time send a blonde family, cause it's almost puberty and i need a girl. they came out from their Expedition, and started to take all their possesions from the truck to the their house, i was totally knock out of conscience when i saw the 60" inch lcd 1080 resolution screen, i felt in love that day, it was amazing they seem like very rich persons, but they were very nice persons, when they they came to town i realized that mayber they were bad persons trying to be the envy, the next morning they were giving gifts and they organized a cookout at the nerghborhood, then i feel really bad i had a bad impression about them, i saw in the cookout that the robertsons were giving stuff, and then i realized that they were not moving their were just visiting they came to the village to bring back joy to us, i saw persons that didn't tlaked for years that were laughing together i saw lots and lots of joy, then i realized that joy was not gone forever, but just needed a little push to be release, the next day they were gone, there was no robertsons, people started making themselves question, but then they got the same point, joy it was they needed and no matter what situation can pass over a village, joy will always come back.
ResponderEliminari like christian story it was nice, oscars story had a good imagination it had a unique touch of oscars style, ariana's story was a good one, but it was long but it was cool.
ResponderEliminarI choose picture # 1 :) ..
ResponderEliminarOcnce upon a time there was a a very happy family that live in Mexico city .
The father and the mother had two kids.
One day the mother got very sick , and his husband took her to the doctorto see what she has brast cancer .
his husband hug her and tell her he'll find the way but she will live .
She took all the treatments but not even that help her , after dying she ask to his husband if he can do a promise with her , she ask him that one day he got in love and be happy with the woman he choose . But nobody hear the promise she asked him . Edgar the younger one had 1 month and Juan had 5 years . Their grandmother and their dad took care of the two guys , they grow healthy and happy . One they his dad got in love with a woman of his work .
And he love her very much that he ask her to marry him . So he took her to his house so his family meet her . The grandmother was very angry because she think , she will take the place of his daughter. And edgar dont like her , but Juan say that if his dad is happy with she , he will accept her .
His dad try to do whatever comes to his mind so the grandama and Edgar like her . But nothing help him . One day his father got very angry becuase they were very mean with she . So he tell to his ex-mother-in-law that he promise his ex-husband that one day he will fall in love another time .
So she think and realize that he is a good man and he desrve to be happy another time , and that his new love wont take the place of his daughter .
Edgar also try to love her new mom . They marry and be very happy .
the story i like the most is Oscar's because it has a lot of imagination , and i dont have ANY imagination .
ResponderEliminarAnd i like William's story because what happen is very true .