
Topic: Kid's Road.
What's the Story...
The story began long ago with a kid who had a happy life, but one day he was stroken by destiny. This kid, had a normal life like everyone else, he attended school, he had good friends, a lovely family and anything that would acomplish a perfect life. Having all these, he thought he would need nothing else, but one day all this ended. The first thing he noticed was how his family each day became more and more distant to him, weeks passed on and he noticed how this got worst. This kid was cool with it, he knew that sometimes your friends replace your family but what he did not knew was that sometimes your just ment to be alone. The more his family rejected, the less he worried about doing good in school, and as you can imagine he got kicked out of school. When this happened he went home got his stuff and he left his house.
At that point he was conscient that from there on he screwed up his life. He needed a place to stay in and a way he could earn money to eat. He had both, "good" and "bad" friends, he was so desperate he asked them if they could help him out. His "good" friends said no, this of course broke his heart, because when you're in need of help and your suposed friends don't help you out it makes you feel real bad. His "bad" friends said to him the had a way to help him out, and of course this kid replied "Thank You". His "bad" friends started to provide him drugs, stolen things, and money, so he could sell them and earn money, and get himself a place to live and start over again. With time he got good deals and bad deals, he stole and he got stolen, he trusted no one. Years passed and he got what he needed to, he restablished in some way his life, but he felt bad with doing what he did and he felt bad making evil to people. He talked about this to his "bad" friends and they told him "once you're in you can't go out". He knew that the only way to get away from this bad habits which he had grown with was escaping. He was so afraid to leave the place where he had grown, he knoew the only person that could really help him out was God. He packed all he had; money, clothing and a picture of his family. All of this in a bag. This kid started his trip and from now on the only one he trusted was himself and no one else. Since that moment on, he knew that he had to make up his own road, and make up a strong character of himself if he wanted to keep on going.

I think is a good story , clear and well redact. But what i didn't like it that it didn't have a happy ending at all, maybe I vcan imagine that yes or that no, but it's because I like stories with happy ending, but even though I think it was a good strory that tell us that we need to be far from all that bad things that are in the world.
ResponderEliminari disagree with ariana i like alot this story becuase it have a surprise ending and thta kind of stories i like becuase it is more to the reality, because in real life mosto of the time happy endings dont exist.
ResponderEliminarwell the story is ok, but i agree with arianna that happy endings are essencial in the stories i liked, but there are nohappy endings almost all the time, so i think this story is a god one.
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