sábado, 14 de febrero de 2009

Walking (Blog Assigment #3)

Are they walking away from somebody or toward somebody? What's the story?


This starts like this, one day there was a boy named John who was an adventurous little kid that like to play at the forest, Later that day he went to the forest to play with the animals, then he went back to his house to play with his little sister Amanda, next he liked to watch TV, before going to sleep he liked to read a book. The next day he went to the forest again to play with the animals, meanwhile his mother was too worried about him, she didn't found him in the house, after she finished looking for him on the house, she started looking for he on the forest, later she took her daugther in her arms and went to the forest, as soon as she was about to enter the forest, she recognized a strange noice and she knew it was her sons voice, she went quikly to the place he was, and took him to the house and prohibited him to enter the forest.
As you can see the mother is till going to the forest for his son, so this means he is not listening to his mother and he still going to the forest, her mother had to punished him and let him without TV for a month, after a while he began to recognized that he was making something wrong and started to act in the good way, later he was able to see TV again, he recognized it was wrong to go into the forest, finally he stayed at home with his mother, later they began to cooked chocolate cookies and he liked to be with his mother nad he stayed with them instead of going into the forest. They all live happily ever after... THE END!!!!xD

2 comentarios:

  1. I think is a creative stroy and was good because it had time-order words like the teacher ask us. It also good beacuse it tell us that we should obey our parents =)!

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  2. This story is bad because if the kid wants to be with nature there should be no one that denies him this privilege.

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