themes for the essay =)

Ariana - 4.- A valuable discipline or practice (lifting weights, rock climbing, karate, meditation, etc.).

Christian - 2.- This school's worst problem (and possible solutions).

Oscar - 7.- Music videos (choose one performer or group, one type of music, or one TV show).

William - 1.- The career I want to study.

Geovanna - 3.- A special or unusual person

Cart (Blog Assignment # 3)

   

One time there was a very happy family that lived in Los Angeles. The family was Peter the father, Annie the mom ,and Dixon the little baby boy. They were the perfect happy couple that have just had their first child and they were so excited to see what happen next in their marriage. Every sunday they went to the supermarket and buy all the things they need for their house, like food and thats stuff. For them Sunday was  good day because both of them get to spend all the day with their baby boy,going to church, then going to the park, and then to the supermarket to buy the things they need, every sunday they did something different, but always going to the supermarkte. Every Sunday was full of a lot of joy, but that was about to change.One Sunday Peter feel bad because he was with a lot of headecks and fell disea. So Annie decide to get him in bed, give him some pills for him to rest and she will take Dixon to the chruch, then to the park, ande like alwys to the supermarke.  

   Peter told her i wasnt a good idea, that he dint want her to go alone, but Annie said nothing will happen that they wil be fine. Peter told Annie th only way she will go was  to get early than usual, Annie accepted. Annie and Dixon were on the supermarket and the have finished to buy everything they have to so they paid and when they were living the supermarket, one black car pass a side of them and 2 man back of them grab them and all thier things, so the cart felt down, and they get them into the car. It was too late and Peter saw that they havent arrived so he decide to calla the plice immediately. They found their car in the supermarket, but they didnt find Dixon and Annie, there were some witnesses, but they dont were to helpful because the men who take nnie and Dixon were covered with masks. Everything happened very quickly so the witnesses couldnt give importan information to the case. But of one thing they were sure Annie and Dixon were kidnapped. Peter was scared and angry, he didnt know what to do. At the next day the kidnappers called him and told him they need 1million dollars or hew wont see again Annie and Dixon, they told them not to tell the police. Peter accept, so have to take the money down the tree of a park a lived write there and Annie and Dixon will be deliver at home. He get the 1 million dollars but niethr Dixon nor Annie appear. They called him again and they told him the need more money, and he give it again, but again they dont appear. Thats when he decide to call the police and told them everything. They put a gps to the telefone, so when they call they will know from where they were calling. But they didnt call again. One week later Peter recived a videotape, he played it , and it was his wife bien raped, and at the back part, he saw the other kidnapper counting all the money he gave to them. For Peter was horrible to see that, ande he hire investigators, pilcemans , all kind of resourcs to find his family, but they never did, and probably the never will.  

The End

Buttons (assingment #3)

This story is about a girl called Maria, she collected this buttons for a benefit action. All start when Ana wanted to start to do something to help children without parents and that live in orphanages. She wanted to do activities there to give them a little bit of happiness, becasue she knew what i feel to live there because she live there since she was 5 years old until she get 18 years. Ana first wanted to started to meet all those children. She picked one orhanage, the one called "Little Children".So after she start to know, then she started to go every week and take balls and table games so they can play. Duuring all that time she started to have somuch love to them, that she wanted to give them more happiness.

The next week she saw on the newspaper a person who need to reccollect buttons and she will bought them. After seeing that she knew she can get a little bit of money to take all the children of the orphanage to have some fun. Soon, she had a little bottle full of buttons so she decided to take them to the person that bought them. She recieved some extra money and after that, with the money she received, she took the children to a park. Yhere they play and bought them some ice cream. Before that she haven't see so much happiness in their eyes. She continue doing that acivity of recollection ofbuttons to get the money she need to make those children happy.

Finally she continue doing that during all her life, they become like if they were their siblings, she was so happy to make them happy and so happy of recollecting buttons for a good cause.

Road (Blog Assignment #3)

Topic: Kid's Road.
What's the Story...
The story began long ago with a kid who had a happy life, but one day he was stroken by destiny. This kid, had a normal life like everyone else, he attended school, he had good friends, a lovely family and anything that would acomplish a perfect life. Having all these, he thought he would need nothing else, but one day all this ended. The first thing he noticed was how his family each day became more and more distant to him, weeks passed on and he noticed how this got worst. This kid was cool with it, he knew that sometimes your friends replace your family but what he did not knew was that sometimes your just ment to be alone. The more his family rejected, the less he worried about doing good in school, and as you can imagine he got kicked out of school. When this happened he went home got his stuff and he left his house.

At that point he was conscient that from there on he screwed up his life. He needed a place to stay in and a way he could earn money to eat. He had both, "good" and "bad" friends, he was so desperate he asked them if they could help him out. His "good" friends said no, this of course broke his heart, because when you're in need of help and your suposed friends don't help you out it makes you feel real bad. His "bad" friends said to him the had a way to help him out, and of course this kid replied "Thank You". His "bad" friends started to provide him drugs, stolen things, and money, so he could sell them and earn money, and get himself a place to live and start over again. With time he got good deals and bad deals, he stole and he got stolen, he trusted no one. Years passed and he got what he needed to, he restablished in some way his life, but he felt bad with doing what he did and he felt bad making evil to people. He talked about this to his "bad" friends and they told him "once you're in you can't go out". He knew that the only way to get away from this bad habits which he had grown with was escaping. He was so afraid to leave the place where he had grown, he knoew the only person that could really help him out was God. He packed all he had; money, clothing and a picture of his family. All of this in a bag. This kid started his trip and from now on the only one he trusted was himself and no one else. Since that moment on, he knew that he had to make up his own road, and make up a strong character of himself if he wanted to keep on going.

Walking (Blog Assigment #3)

Are they walking away from somebody or toward somebody? What's the story?

This starts like this, one day there was a boy named John who was an adventurous little kid that like to play at the forest, Later that day he went to the forest to play with the animals, then he went back to his house to play with his little sister Amanda, next he liked to watch TV, before going to sleep he liked to read a book. The next day he went to the forest again to play with the animals, meanwhile his mother was too worried about him, she didn't found him in the house, after she finished looking for him on the house, she started looking for he on the forest, later she took her daugther in her arms and went to the forest, as soon as she was about to enter the forest, she recognized a strange noice and she knew it was her sons voice, she went quikly to the place he was, and took him to the house and prohibited him to enter the forest.
As you can see the mother is till going to the forest for his son, so this means he is not listening to his mother and he still going to the forest, her mother had to punished him and let him without TV for a month, after a while he began to recognized that he was making something wrong and started to act in the good way, later he was able to see TV again, he recognized it was wrong to go into the forest, finally he stayed at home with his mother, later they began to cooked chocolate cookies and he liked to be with his mother nad he stayed with them instead of going into the forest. They all live happily ever after... THE END!!!!xD

THIS IS A PICTURE OF THE AMAZING GAME OF THE SUPERBOWL XLII
THIS WAS THE MIRACLE PASS that lead the steelers to the championships, i lose all my bets, but the game was interesting, this was a very important game in the USA, one comercial during this game cost like 29 million dollars, and in las vegas the total, of money was of 94 million dollars, many people were happy and other ones disapointed,but it was a good game i enjoy it, and like it no matter if Ambriz won 50 pesos, so tell me what do you think about the game

or if you like this kind of events or anything, write anything.

Smoking Advertisement

- What subject is the ad addressing?

 I think this ad is adressing health because it is saying that people who smoke sooner or later ends in a bad situation like this man that we see in the picture that have to use a  tube to breaht and talk for fault of the cigarrate.

- Who is the target audience?

Of course that is made for that people that smokes , here it doesnt especifes any gender  , or age because nowadays a lot of people smoke , man , woman, even teenagers thats why they make all this ads , so i think the target is every person that smokes. 

- What is the intended purpose?

That pepole that somokes see one of all athe consecuences the cigarrate brings in to your life and for them to start quiting the cigarrate , and i think for people that dont smoke too for them to think they wont do it never.

- Is the ad successful in achieving its purpose?

I think the message is very clear , because yo can see the face os this man of fear and sadness holding this tube for him to be able to breath and talk . Theres a lot of people that decide or try to quite smoking because of all of this ads and the publicity they make.

- What subject is the ad addressing?
I think this ad is addressing the legalization of mariguana for people that really want to use it in a good way, not in the "drug" sense many people use it for.

- Who is the target audience?
The target audience mainly will be people who administrate the country or place where its habitants want the legalization, it can also be to the same habitants because there is also a lot of people who think the same about themes related to this but many people just take it in silence or don't want to take action in it.

- What is the intended purpose?
The legalization of mariguana and make people understand why is it so good.

- Is the ad successful in achieving its purpose?

There must be many ads like this one but, the purpose it has has been successful in many places where it is already legalized or it is taking action in being legalized. In Mexico is one place where it is taking proccess in the legalization of mariguana.

anorexia & bulimia advertisement

hii =) ..
This picture is what a lot of teenagers are going in.
They thinnk they are overweight and the reality is that they are a lot underwight, they wan't to be thiner and thiner becasue of fashion adn society. This adverstisement is for health, becasue that can even kill them and also make their sel-esteen to be low. This advertisement is more for teenagers who are happening for this and also fot those who don't, so they can see that it is no necessary to be so thin, also for the mothers of teenagers so they can make consius on then, to let them now how they can be goos and how they can feel good with theirself. . For health, we need to care of our health, so we can avoid diseases like high prssure, diatabetes adn those kid, but we can achieve that having a good alimentation and doing a little bit of exercise.
That is not to be healthy, it is a really big problem and it need to be treat. So let's be consous and take care og our self and health in a good way!
I think that this advertisement leave us very clear the message, becasue we can see that she si very very think, but she doen't see that becasue of the obsession she has to be thin.
Take care of your health, but in a correct way!

Assignment #1 Feedback...

Good job guys! William, what happened to your punctuation?!?! And paragraph structure? It was very confusing to read, to be honest. Other than that, you all did a fine job, and will get full team credit for this assignment. William, your individual credit will go down a bit because I had such a hard time reading what you wrote. 

Thumbs up!

write a story =)...