2nd Parcial Blog Assignment # 3

The Sunset House

This story goes like this, once upon a time, there was a house a good old fashioned farm ubicated on the mile 23 in the 75 north road, near the state of California. This farm was full with joy, the family that lived there were religious people, they had values including the ones of responsability and respect, they enjoyed the family adventures and always wanted all kind of animals, so they bougth it and began their family farm zoo, the farm was a pretty big it was 30 square miles just for the fun of this family.

Oh, by the way they were the Phenington's, father Roy, mother Jule, and the two boys, Norman and Brian. they spent lots time toguether, they liked to play all day along the farm, they went to all places, exploring from map to map , they seem like Cristhopher Columbus and Hernan Cortes, they went from the barn to the lake, admiring their farm, on their way home they liked to visit the creepy forest just for fun, also it was a shortcut, on their way they always ended on the fence of the separation between their farm and the wilderness, they liked that road because it was full of trees, like to arrive home early so they could see the sunset toguether and so they went thay arrive just in time went the sun ligth started to loss intencity.

At home were their parents waiting for them, Roy was in the kitchen installing the new stove while Jule was upstair unpacking boxes and organizing everyone's stuff. The boys were racing each other to arrive home, both were fast, but Norma was a little bit older than Brian so he ran faster than him, they arrive home, all messy and exhausted, when their mother saw them, she was too happy, because she though that a new house was going to be hard for them to used to it, so she just them to take a bath. They prepared everything for sunset, they just loved sunsets, they went to the roof of the house admiring the amazing bless of a sunset.

Like Roy used to say ''sunset is not the abscent of the sun, it's the star of a day in another place'', they all sat toguether in family at the beautiful sunset. The next Day, all the family woke up, and sat at the table to have breakfast, Brian and Norman were all sleepy, so Roys told them that if they Finish eating their breakfast he was going to lend them the keys of the Boat in the lake, they both eat their breakfast so fast like a Nascar car, the took the keys of the boat and they went to the lake. They were enjoying the trip in the boat so much they lost sense of time, when they noticed it was late, the sunset was already half of it's way, so they drove all the way to the fishing port, they were in a hurry, they knew it was late so they decided to race each other and once again they took the shortcut of the forest, they ran so fast they didn't knew where they were. until they saw a clear road, they ran until they leave the forest, suddenly they stopped, just at the finish line of the forest, they were all mess up, they didn't know where they were, it was the same road pf the separation of the farm, but there was a house beside the road, they looked at each other and were surprised, they didn't know how it was there, then Norman though that maybe it was a surprised house for them, but his father didn't told, because he wanted to surprise them, so they broke any confussion with the good idea Norman had, so they decided to go in just to see what their father was making, they get closer to the house, when they put a step in the house this one opened the principal door, they both get scared they run back fice meters, then Norman said, ''You know maybe it's our dad trying to scare us, let's get in'' and Briand answer '' It looks creepy you know'', Norman answered ''So do you, come on don't be such a coward, so they both get in, when they enter both said ''Dad are you there, common get out from wherever you are'', but when they get amazed with every single part inside the house, the walls where all full with gold and silver, anything you touched it was gold and silver including the floor, they were in the house they knew that their father wasn't there, but everything was perfect and they wanted to be there, they went to the first room inside there were all kinds of toys nad videogames, including mature rated, they were amazed, Norman saw something strange, he saw like a figure of a boys who was writting something on the wall, he didn't know why if there is so many toys and videogames there was a boy there in made of gold writting on the wall, while Brian he ran all the way to the toys, it was getting late the sunset it was almos over, but they were entertained in the Creepy nice house they found on their way home.

While playing Norman knew it was late so they needed to get home, while biran was telling him ''five more minutes and that's all please, i said the p word, you know what mom says about this nice word'' while Norman said ''OK, five more minutes then we are gone ok?'' Brian in his eigth year old voice said ''Thank you brother'', Norman went to the wall the kid was and then he saw something, it was somehow like a kind of letter or something, but it was written in Spanish, Norman had a good friend named Ramon, how was a Mexican and used to talk with himi spanish so he read ''Mis deseos mas grandes he encontrado en esta casa, mas sim embargo la maldad en ellos me libro de la libertad que yo he disfrutaba, cualquiera que entre en esta casa debe salir antes del atardecer o su cuerpo quedara atrapada en el oro que uno tanto desea, mas sim embargo una vez adentro es dificl luchar para dejar lo mas deseado'' He had a hard time reading that, but when he readed the half he went to the room his brother was, and he saw him, he was full of joy playing with everything that was inside the room, he didn't remember he was on a creepy and strange house, he took him while he was mad at him, because he was not letting him to continue playing, when he force him out of the room a big sound was heared, like a pice of wood being broken, they both get scared, when they heared the sound they ran fast to the entrance door, to get out, when they were almost out of the house, the door began to close slowly, the ran as faster as a Space Rocket, when they where centimeters to get out of the house, Brian felt down, Norman realized his brother was in a problem and he instead of getting, went back for his brother, he give him a hand grab him faster and pull him up, when this happened the door stopped for a while and when they finally made it out of the house it closed, and just infront of them is began to collapse, you heared a old grand farmer laughing and many kids voices crying, along with the wood being crush and broken, they both were too scared so they just ran without stopping to their home, when they were about to arrive their parent Roy was in the barn with a lantern looking for them, they saw him and hug him at the same time they were crying, they told him the story about the house, his father Roy grab them both from the hand and took him to the house, he send them to take a bath, they eated and they went to sleep.

The next day they went in the afternoon, waiting for the sunset where the kids saw the house, they stayed there at very noon, inclusive both kids went asleep on the truck, they got in the truck and drove all the way to the house, they never took that shortcut again, they never live the farm again for shure and they decided never to go influenced by any desire, they decided to choose what was the priority of evertything, his father just sat with them telling them stories about his childhod and he started saying '' You know kids, your grandfather used to tell me lessons stories, i remember of the Rackenford twins, they were just a pair of old grandfarmers how liked to correct kids, by giving a big everything thay wanted, but at the ended they took him into a house they had on the outside of their farm and put them in a kind of jail, and we never heard of them again, then his brother the good Rackenford, leave them free, because he loved childrens and he didn't wanted what his brother was doing, until one day the good ld grand farmer and kids where no longer able to get out of the house, but i think all this is a myth so my grandfather wanted me to learn a lesson, never happened to me so maybe he was just joking'' he ended, they clam down told fun jokes and went to sleep, they never saw that house again and in matter of fact i do believe those old grand farmer existed, the Rackenford, because if they didn't existed i wouldn't be here telling you the story don't you think?........