lunes, 23 de marzo de 2009

2nd Parcial Blog Assignment # 3




The Sunset House


This story goes like this, once upon a time, there was a house a good old fashioned farm ubicated on the mile 23 in the 75 north road, near the state of California. This farm was full with joy, the family that lived there were religious people, they had values including the ones of responsability and respect, they enjoyed the family adventures and always wanted all kind of animals, so they bougth it and began their family farm zoo, the farm was a pretty big it was 30 square miles just for the fun of this family.
Oh, by the way they were the Phenington's, father Roy, mother Jule, and the two boys, Norman and Brian. they spent lots time toguether, they liked to play all day along the farm, they went to all places, exploring from map to map , they seem like Cristhopher Columbus and Hernan Cortes, they went from the barn to the lake, admiring their farm, on their way home they liked to visit the creepy forest just for fun, also it was a shortcut, on their way they always ended on the fence of the separation between their farm and the wilderness, they liked that road because it was full of trees, like to arrive home early so they could see the sunset toguether and so they went thay arrive just in time went the sun ligth started to loss intencity.
At home were their parents waiting for them, Roy was in the kitchen installing the new stove while Jule was upstair unpacking boxes and organizing everyone's stuff. The boys were racing each other to arrive home, both were fast, but Norma was a little bit older than Brian so he ran faster than him, they arrive home, all messy and exhausted, when their mother saw them, she was too happy, because she though that a new house was going to be hard for them to used to it, so she just them to take a bath. They prepared everything for sunset, they just loved sunsets, they went to the roof of the house admiring the amazing bless of a sunset.


Like Roy used to say ''sunset is not the abscent of the sun, it's the star of a day in another place'', they all sat toguether in family at the beautiful sunset. The next Day, all the family woke up, and sat at the table to have breakfast, Brian and Norman were all sleepy, so Roys told them that if they Finish eating their breakfast he was going to lend them the keys of the Boat in the lake, they both eat their breakfast so fast like a Nascar car, the took the keys of the boat and they went to the lake. They were enjoying the trip in the boat so much they lost sense of time, when they noticed it was late, the sunset was already half of it's way, so they drove all the way to the fishing port, they were in a hurry, they knew it was late so they decided to race each other and once again they took the shortcut of the forest, they ran so fast they didn't knew where they were. until they saw a clear road, they ran until they leave the forest, suddenly they stopped, just at the finish line of the forest, they were all mess up, they didn't know where they were, it was the same road pf the separation of the farm, but there was a house beside the road, they looked at each other and were surprised, they didn't know how it was there, then Norman though that maybe it was a surprised house for them, but his father didn't told, because he wanted to surprise them, so they broke any confussion with the good idea Norman had, so they decided to go in just to see what their father was making, they get closer to the house, when they put a step in the house this one opened the principal door, they both get scared they run back fice meters, then Norman said, ''You know maybe it's our dad trying to scare us, let's get in'' and Briand answer '' It looks creepy you know'', Norman answered ''So do you, come on don't be such a coward, so they both get in, when they enter both said ''Dad are you there, common get out from wherever you are'', but when they get amazed with every single part inside the house, the walls where all full with gold and silver, anything you touched it was gold and silver including the floor, they were in the house they knew that their father wasn't there, but everything was perfect and they wanted to be there, they went to the first room inside there were all kinds of toys nad videogames, including mature rated, they were amazed, Norman saw something strange, he saw like a figure of a boys who was writting something on the wall, he didn't know why if there is so many toys and videogames there was a boy there in made of gold writting on the wall, while Brian he ran all the way to the toys, it was getting late the sunset it was almos over, but they were entertained in the Creepy nice house they found on their way home.
While playing Norman knew it was late so they needed to get home, while biran was telling him ''five more minutes and that's all please, i said the p word, you know what mom says about this nice word'' while Norman said ''OK, five more minutes then we are gone ok?'' Brian in his eigth year old voice said ''Thank you brother'', Norman went to the wall the kid was and then he saw something, it was somehow like a kind of letter or something, but it was written in Spanish, Norman had a good friend named Ramon, how was a Mexican and used to talk with himi spanish so he read ''Mis deseos mas grandes he encontrado en esta casa, mas sim embargo la maldad en ellos me libro de la libertad que yo he disfrutaba, cualquiera que entre en esta casa debe salir antes del atardecer o su cuerpo quedara atrapada en el oro que uno tanto desea, mas sim embargo una vez adentro es dificl luchar para dejar lo mas deseado'' He had a hard time reading that, but when he readed the half he went to the room his brother was, and he saw him, he was full of joy playing with everything that was inside the room, he didn't remember he was on a creepy and strange house, he took him while he was mad at him, because he was not letting him to continue playing, when he force him out of the room a big sound was heared, like a pice of wood being broken, they both get scared, when they heared the sound they ran fast to the entrance door, to get out, when they were almost out of the house, the door began to close slowly, the ran as faster as a Space Rocket, when they where centimeters to get out of the house, Brian felt down, Norman realized his brother was in a problem and he instead of getting, went back for his brother, he give him a hand grab him faster and pull him up, when this happened the door stopped for a while and when they finally made it out of the house it closed, and just infront of them is began to collapse, you heared a old grand farmer laughing and many kids voices crying, along with the wood being crush and broken, they both were too scared so they just ran without stopping to their home, when they were about to arrive their parent Roy was in the barn with a lantern looking for them, they saw him and hug him at the same time they were crying, they told him the story about the house, his father Roy grab them both from the hand and took him to the house, he send them to take a bath, they eated and they went to sleep.
The next day they went in the afternoon, waiting for the sunset where the kids saw the house, they stayed there at very noon, inclusive both kids went asleep on the truck, they got in the truck and drove all the way to the house, they never took that shortcut again, they never live the farm again for shure and they decided never to go influenced by any desire, they decided to choose what was the priority of evertything, his father just sat with them telling them stories about his childhod and he started saying '' You know kids, your grandfather used to tell me lessons stories, i remember of the Rackenford twins, they were just a pair of old grandfarmers how liked to correct kids, by giving a big everything thay wanted, but at the ended they took him into a house they had on the outside of their farm and put them in a kind of jail, and we never heard of them again, then his brother the good Rackenford, leave them free, because he loved childrens and he didn't wanted what his brother was doing, until one day the good ld grand farmer and kids where no longer able to get out of the house, but i think all this is a myth so my grandfather wanted me to learn a lesson, never happened to me so maybe he was just joking'' he ended, they clam down told fun jokes and went to sleep, they never saw that house again and in matter of fact i do believe those old grand farmer existed, the Rackenford, because if they didn't existed i wouldn't be here telling you the story don't you think?........

2nd Partial Blog (Assignment # 3)














An old Fisherman

Long ago, around 1815s, near Miami , there was a small of island on which there was a small, small town composed of about 100-140 people. It was a very sick and poor town, they did not have a lot of resources, and they did not have any comunication device. Their only comunication system was through fire and bottle messages. The more the time passed, the more the people got sick.

The only way the inhabitants could get food was by killing birds like pigeons or fishing. Fishing was the base of the town's economy. But the fish the fisherman caught each year decreased. Town's people knew it was already over, there was no way they could get to Miami and get health treatments, so they knew that the Island they called Diland (Doom Land) was the place where they were going to die. Time passed and the population slowly decreased.

After 35 years passed on, Diland was almost empty there were about 20-30 habitants. Babys and kids became teenagers and adults, adults were now the oldest inhabitants from Diland. They knew it was over already, sooner or later they will soon be doomed. But among the people there was an old fisherman who grew since he was a baby in Diland. This fisherman did not was comfortable with the idea that he was dying on the island. Specially because he had never seen the world as it is. He did not knew anything outside Diland.

One day when he was about to go fishing very early in the morning. He saw how the sun was rising it was the most beutiful look he had ever seen on his life. Since that moment on he knew he wanted to leave that doomed island and meet the whole world. Instead of going fishing he packed all he had, he fixed his boat and he sailed away from Diland. He did not know were to go so he just let the flow of the water move his boat hoping that worked.

Days passed, and there was no sign of land in miles. The fisherman did not loose faith, besides he wanted to get his dream acomplished. One day the climate was bad, the fisherman inmediately knew a storm was coming, he was afraid, he was not prepared for such thing. He went in a cabin and hoped everything went alright. As he was in the cabin, the storm began. He could hear how huge waves of water started to hit the boat's walls. The old man was afraid he did not know what to do, his faith was gone. He was very sad, he replied over and over again: "What a stupid idea". As he fell down in depression one of the wooden boxes he had on the top part of the cabin fell over his head and knocked him asleep.

The next day, the old man woke up. He saw through the window and he saw the sun shining, he could not believe he made it alive. Other than that he could not believe what hes eyes were seeing. He went out the cabin and he broke in tears as he saw the sun rising in the exact same way it did before he left Diland. Under the shiny sun there was the clearest view of land he had ever seen, and as he continued to watch the sun rise, tears kept felling down his eyes. And slowly he started to die as the only inhabitant from Diland who actually saw land, and how beutiful the world is.

sábado, 21 de marzo de 2009

assigment 3 ariana :)







Once upon a dreamer girl called Maria. She live in a small town of Mexico. She camed from a medium low family, but an exmaple family, they loved each other a lot. Her parents take care of her a lot, becasue they knew she could have a great future. She was a nice, pretty and intellogent girl. Since she was small she always dreamed to be a famous model and travel around the world in the ebst runways. She knew she was really far from that dream. She also knew that it was almost an impossible dream for many reasons. One of the reasons was that in that town she had no oportinities and she need to travel, but her family didn't have the economic resources to help her. But they did help her, and didn't teld her that she was crazy, nevasue they knew she had all the talent to go around tio best cirties and that God will hep then to make her dream true.

Everybody in her town love her becasue she was of the most pretty girsl there. Also she was a hard worker girl and a great student. She did all this bexcasue she work to help her parents with the house, and helps her little brothers. And she loved school, becasue she knew that when she finish it, she could work and have money to go and find her dream. Every year she was queen ofher town. Every year, they choose and the town always choose her for her beauty and simpathy. She had been the town queen for more than 3 years. She started when she was 14 and now she is almost 18.

When she was almost 18 years old, some of her friends register her in a moedl auditions that will be in the capital. She loved the idea but she idn't have money to go. Between all the town get money and send her. There was the start of her career. It was an opportunity that take her very far. In the caoital she won and she need to go and live there beacsue a lot of models agencies wanted her. In few months she was one of the top models of her county. She was born for it.

The best thing of Maria was that she never forget about her toown and family. She was happy becasue she was becoming true her dream, but also becasue she was able to give a better life to her family.

One day, she received a call from one of the best model agenices of the USA, and she was asked to go to Los Angeles so they can meet. She immediately accepted, and the meeting will be the next weekend. The day arrived and she was already there. She was so curious and excited. She make up and drees in an appropiate way, she tried to look elegant, fresh and casual at the sam time. The modle agents that meet her were so in love with her great angel and simpatyhy, the same as with her beauty thhat they didn't think twice to ask her to be thenext front page of a great magazine they have a contrat with. She was almost crying of so many happiness, is was the dream of her life, be in an international magazine that she accepted. That was her ticket to travel around the world in the best magazines and rumways.

All the desugner in the world, and the most fanous started to know about her that all want her in thier runways. She started to be the model od the time. She started to travel around America, Europe and Asia. Even though, she was the same town girl that she was sicne she was small. She will never forget that the dream she was realizing was thanks to her town hat always belive on her. During her work around the world she always take her mom with her, and when she have time she always go and visit her old friends. Now she live in one the best cities in the worlds, with all thsoe full of light, but her favorte city in the world was her small town. There she had the best moment of her childrenhood. She loved to visit her old and small yellow house.


She was so famous that she had even a contrat with Vcitoria's Secret to be a Victoria's Secret angel. Where are just the best models of the world and she was. Even though she had a lot of work, she had time for her personal life. She met a guide in one of her travels around the world and they become boyfriends. He loved to go with her to her old town, becasue he had a similar story, he also came from a little town of Spain and he realize his dream with a lot of effort.

So, after 5 yeard of being boyfriends, he aske her to marry him. She obviously accept and they mary in a big wedding. A lot of people went. It was one of the best wedding of the world, it was elegant and simple as she was. She continue modeling for the rest of her life. She maked a Model Agency, were she went to small towns and give the oppotunity to girls like her to become theirr dream true and she make it.




 A Love Story


      One time there was this man named Robert that he married a woman she was in loved with named Sara they lived in Las Vegas, they met in a book store. Both of them love books and they like the same writer and stuff. They start dating everything was goign graet in their relationship and they start realizing that they want more than only going out together. So the decide to get married, they have this beautiful dream wedding, everything was perfect. Robert bought a mansion for them to have a lot of kids and raise them together. The problems become when they tried to have kids, they tried over an over again to have kids, but it looks like it doesn`t work out. They had one year and a half of being married and no kids. This was sad for both of them, but stressful to Robert because he wanted to have a lot of kids that`s the reason he bought that mansion. 


      This issue about having kids was becoming bigger and bigger, and porblems become for them of everyday life. So both decide to ask for help for their problem. They went to a doctor and they make both of them some medical exams to see was wrong with them and why the cannot have kids. This doctor gave the results to Robert and Sara and they discoevered that Sara have a problem on her femenine organs. She was steril and besides that she have sings of cancer. By knowing this Sara blame her self for not having kids with Robert, but Robert didn`t blame her, instead he was worried for her and he tell her there were other solutions to have kids, and that everything it is going to be okay. The doctor told them that Sara have to begin as sooner as possible chimiotherapy for the cancer not to spread and for them to try to save her. For both of them their life in those moments were a chaos.


       But Robert won`t give up, he will save her wife and find another way to have kids. So Robert took her to specialist in Europe, the doctor confirm what the doctor in Las Vegas told them so they start immediatelly the chiomoterapys in Europe. Sara star the chimioterapys and of course she was most of the time she was tired and weak, her hair start falling. For her that was a big trauma because she was always this beatiful and glamorous woman that every man wanted her and now she was bold. Five months have passed and she was doing better but not that better she should, the doctor talk to Robert and told him if things keep this way probabbly cancer will spread out. Robert was a good man and very religios, so he every night and morning ask to god to make a miracle and cure his wife. Their life in Europe was tiering because they just went form house to hospital and to hospital to house, they were doing lal the possible for Sara to get better.


        Seven months now and Sara just don`t get better, so she ask Robert to go into the room, beacuse she want to tell him something. Sara knew she was about to die. So she told Robert that if she dies any of those days she want for him to be happy with another woman and have kids and raise them in that mansion as his plans were. Robert told her she won`t die and that together they will find a way to get through all that they were passing through, The both start crying and the pray to god for Sara. Extrangely the next week Sara was doing so much better, everyone was shocked because with the situation of Sara it was for her to dire in those days. She advanced a lot, in two months she was already fine, she only have to go to the doctor once a month to check how she is doing and for the cancer no to appear again. They were so happy and very thanked to god.



     They dicided to adoppt children, so the adoppt four. They took them to their mansion and they start racing them like they always dream to. Three years later Sara start to fell diasey and nauseas, they were really worried because if the cancer reappeared or stuff, so Robert took her to the doctor and they discovered that she was pregnant of twins, again thewy were shocked and surprised. Defintely this was another miracle. They were so thankful to god that they build a big church for people to go and pray to god and can recieve miracles like they did. They had their twins and with the other four they were six. They raise them in that mansion and they were live happy forever.

2nd Partial Blog Assignment # 3





lunes, 16 de marzo de 2009

2nd Partial Blog Assignment #2 (How to cook a quesadilla?)

Brainstorm:

  • What kind of quesadilla
  • type of cheese
  • ingredients
  • type of tortilla
  • temperature of the pan
  • accompany sauce or dressing

Paragraph Process Essay:

How to cook a quesadilla? we know is dificult to cook food; to ad the ingredients to put the rigth amount of species and even the term you want the food if it is 3/4 or full cook, but to cook a delicious meal like a quesadilla is not as difficult as you think, a quesadilla is a meal based on the use of two tortillas united by a melted slice of cheese and it is commonly accompanied by a sauce or dressing. The quesadilla it can be as easy for ones and difficult to others, it will depend on the attention you pay to what you're doing, i remember a time when i was cooking a quesadilla and i got distracted by a tv show, and when i remembered the quesadilla i find it all burn, and i had to make everything again, so i will show how to make a basic and gice you some advices about how to make a delicious quesadilla.

First, you need to be in a kitchen with a stove, be sure that the kitchen you're in has everysingle cooking tool you need to cook, and don't forget to clean your hand first, before cooking anything to avoid our food becoming contamined by bacteria, when you are already in the kitchen with all you need, you have to have all the ingredients which are: two tortillas of any kind, one slice of cheese, it can be mozarella, cheddar, chihuahua, fresh cheese, any of them just keep in mind what kind of flavour you want on the quesadilla and based on that choose the cheese, and the stove, the pan to cook it and a spatulla.

The next thing to do before gething all the ingredients is to grab the first tortilla and put it on a plate, so that it be ready to add the ingredients you will use on it, next you grab the slice of cheese you have chosen and put it on the tortilla on the plate, it is recomended to try to apply the slice of cheese centered so that it can be cooked rigth, then this is the experimental part according to the taste you want on the quesadilla and also on the hunger you will add to this quesadilla the extraingredients you want it can be meat, mushrooms, slice of ham, green chilli, beans,etc. whatever you want to add to the quesadilla, then you grab the other slice of tortilla and you put it on top of everything, be sure to don't leave unbalanced amounts of the ingredients of the quesadilla, try to make it look plain, by balancing the ingredients in the quesadilla so that no big amount are found.

Later on when you have already the ingredients toguether, you grab the quesadilla from the plate, be carefull when you do this step, because there is a high posibility of dropping it on the floor and all our process will be screwed, you grab it carefully and put it on the pan, as soon as you have it on the pan you turn on the stove and apply a middle flame to the pan so that our ingredients in the quesadilla melted or cook completely, when you're done with this you wait for about 5 minutes waiting on the cheese to melt.

Finally, mean while you wait for the cheese to melt, you have turn carefully the side of the tortilla with the spatulla, so that both sides will be cook when the cheese melt, later at the moment you see that the cheese is melting, you turn off the stove and grab the quesadilla with the spatulla and put it on a plate, as you can see we have made a delicious quesadilla, as i said before a quesadilaa is a easy meal to make and it can be accompany with a sauce, you can use hot sauce, pepper chilli, or habanero sauce it will depend on the taste youwant that the quesadilla gather, how to make quesadilla? well as you can see it's easy, gather all ingredients, apply them toguether, put them to cook on the pan, take them from the pan and that's all you have a delicious quesadilla to enjoy, remember to wash your hand after and before preparing and eating your quesadilla safety first, now have your self a very delicious meal.

barinstorming and process essay

BARINSTORMING

How to clean your room?

*dirty
*mess
*bedroom
*bed
*be clean
*clean bedspread
*clean pillows
*mop
*perfume for the air
*be clean
* pick uo all teh stuff
*broom
*oil for furniture

PROCESS ESSAY

To clean your room may be kind of boring and somoething you never want to do. Even though it is something necessary so it can be nice, and your bedroom can look nice. If you don't do it it will look ugly. Also it will be full od dust and can cause you some allergies. Also to have a mess in your room cause you probblems when you want to find something becasue of all the mess you don't know where is it. So oif you want to rpevent all this you just need to follow the next steps. So your bedroom can look nice and be clean in a few minutes.

The first step is to clean all the stuff you have spread around your room and leave it clean. Trying to put everything in its place. Luike that way will be easier to clean the furnitue and the floor. So, after everything is in its place, now you need to get a small piece of towel that won't be useful no more. After you get iit, you wet it just a litlle bif, so it can be like humid. Then with that wet towel clean all the furnitue so the dust can be remove. After you have clean all the furniture wuith the wet tomwel, now you need to get another piece of towel and put it some furniture oil, like plegde of some of those. Then clean againg your furnitures with these towel, and everytime you clean each furniture put more. After you clean the furniture is time to clean the floor. First you need to clean it with the broom so the dust go out. Next you need to wet the mop and oput some Fabuloso so it can smell good. After you clean it with the mop, wait a little time so it can be completely dry. Finally, after doing all the steps above your room will be clean and will look nice.

Some tips so your bedroom wuill be clean for more time is to do very good the step of the furniture oil and to put a lot of Fabuloso to the mop so it can stay smelling ood for a long time. aother step is to repeat those steps at least one time a week, and cosse a day to do it, for example all the Saturdays is good. Another thing you can do is to try during the wick to pick all you leave tehre, and try to have everything in its place.

So, those are the steps so you can have a clean room. In conclusion is a simple, easy and fast process that will give you great results. And is really nice to have a clean bedroom. Obe iof the reasons is that it looks better, also that when you do your homerworks you can concentrate more. And the best of having a clean room for me is that I can slepp better and I love to spleep comfortable.